This morning my mom woke me up by turning the light on at 6:00 a.m. When the light went on it hurt my eyes so I put my head under the covers. As I was getting up I decided to just lie in bed for ten minutes. Also I had to make my bed and got some clothes on and tripped over my roller blades because I left them from yesterday after school. Then I went to the bathroom to take a shower and brush my teeth.
After my mom yelled "breakfast is ready," I had four cider donuts and a glass orange juice. After that, I watched TV for fifteen minutes and at seven I went out to the bus.
I got on the bus it was jam packed with kids yelling and screaming. Also the bus was cold and the heater wasn’t on and I could see my breath. All the yelling and screaming woke me up because I was a little tired. After about a half hour the bus arrived at school.
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This piece was very good with its details. I liked the part when you wrote; "After my mom yelled 'breakfast is ready'". It was easy to follow and focused on your morning. I could picture it in my head.
ReplyDeleteJessie Berthiaume, Blue Crew
Jack "TUCK'EAGE' Sears, Blue Crew
Jared, this was very descriptive! I felt like I was right there with you!
ReplyDelete- Mrs. Goyette